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Post by Erin on Nov 27, 2004 21:43:51 GMT
ok i'm going to try a serious one out for size..
She said she loved me so why did she leave? was i not good enough, or was it just a fling?
Chapter 1 *Eric's POV*
i sat at home watching the television waiting for someone to call. suddenly the phone rang and i picked it up.
"Hey sweetcheeks!"
it was my girlfriend for 2 years my heart fluttered at the sound of her voice. "hey honey."
"so what are you up to? just watching tv waiting for moi to call?" she always had the knack for knowing what i was up to.
"Yah that's about right, i'm glad you called. you wanna go hang out tonight?"
"sure come over to my place, its so much cleaner than yours." she giggled, and my face flushed red.
"well," i grumbled, " i can't help but be messy i'm a boy." she giggled some more," sure i'll come over to your house when do you want me over?"
"lets say in thirty minutes if you can clean yourself by then. ok? great i'll talk to you later baby. i love you."
"ok i love you too. bye Jennifer."
I hung up the phone and ran to get ready. i picked up a shirt off the floor. i sniffed it... hmm its good, didn't pass out right? ok, then i ran and got some pants. i quickly washed my face and tryed to make my hair messier, grabbed the keys and dashed out the door. i got in the car. sprayed some cologne that was in the glove compartment, and drove to her house.
i ran up to the door and just as i went to knock, the door opened. Jennifer ran up to me and hugged me. "hey darling! long time no see!"
we went inside and spent some time together
ok this may not sound relevant to gc but i promise it will...
Erin aka Tigglet
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Post by Erin on Nov 27, 2004 22:52:06 GMT
ok just for you lol.
we were one or so i thought. it seems her heart was easily bought.
Chapter 2 *Jennifers POV*
We lay in my bed, as i stroked his hair. he opened his eyes and gave me the famous i love you eyes. i kissed his head and got out of bed. i took a shower and told him i had to go to work. he kisses me goodbye, i told him i loved him and he replied with the same i love you too.
i walked out of the house and went to work
my love for her will never end, she told me the same. why did she have to leave, and act like she had won the game.
Chapter 3 *Eric's POV*
i left shortly after she left, and i felt unbelievably happy. i felt so lucky that i had this woman as my girlfriend. i just can't let her get away. That's when i decided that i would take her out friday night and propose to her. yah that's sounds good. i hope she'll say yes. What am i saying??!!??!! of course she'll say yes she loves me... she told me she did.
i got home and logged onto the computer she was online. i smiled to myself as i typed.
Ericstheman: Naughty girl online while at work.. tsk tsk.
Jenestjolie: lol your so silly.
Ericstheman: i know i can't help it, love makes me do crazy things...
Jenestjolie: i think there's something more to it than that.
Ericstheman: nope i'm just in love with the most beautiful girl ever.
Jenestjolie: that's sweet sugar, oh i have to go the boss is here...
Ericstheman: ok i love you
Jenestjolie: yah i love you too.
she said she found another, this man who was so great, she said the chemistry between us has been missing of late.
Chapter 4 *Jennifers POV*
i quickly x-ed out of the convo, while my boss walked by. i stood at the counter, and someone walked into the store. he was average height, and wore a lot of black. something about his face interested me. he came closer and i saw these astonishing hazel eyes staring at me. i was lost, so lost in his face that i didn't hear him asking me a question.
"um excuse me miss." he said waving his hand in my face
"huh? oh yah, can i help you sir?"
"i was asking where the magazines were."
"oh that sounds like a good question, haha i guess you are really good at asking questions because that was a really good question."
"um thanks i guess. but Where are the magazines?"
"oh um second isle at the back."
"thank you."
he turned around and walked to the back of the store. as he walked i stared at his butt. i licked my lips. o my gosh what am i doing??!!??!! i have a boyfriend, of whom i love and oh what the heck this guy is sexy!
he came back up to the counter to pay for his magazines. he handed me a credit card and i read the name. Benjamin Madden.i started talking to him. the line eventually grew behind him, so he asked me for his number so he could talk to me later. i gave it to him.
Erin aka Tigglet
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Post by Erin on Nov 29, 2004 19:43:39 GMT
I loved her dearly, i loved her most sincerely, but my love, i guess, she couldn't see very clearly
Chapter 5 *Benji's POV*
I stood outside of the store for this girl who's name tag said Jennifer. There was something about this girl that made her untouchable. it intrigued me and i had to know more about her. she came out a few moments later and i stepped in front of her.
"Can I walk you to your car?" i asked with a friendly smile.
She hesitated and said," ok."
i walked with her down the street, and we stopped at her car. she turned around to get another look at me and said, "I've seen you before..."
I laughed," well um i was just in the store that you work at..."
"no," she said with a serious tone," i mean i've seen you on the tv or the magazines or something like that."
I looked at her and realized that she didn't know at all. "well i am in this band, and we've gotten some publicity."
"oh, i guess that's it then. well um talk to you later?" she ended with a question, and i nodded my head as if to say "sure". she quickly got in her car and left.
The two fo us, we were in sync. but her love was gone within a blink.
Chapter 6 *Eric's POV*
it was tuesday, and i went over to Jennifer's again. i was too restless last night so i had gone to a jewelry store and picked out the perfect ring. i carried it with me now, i felt that if i left it alone for a mere second it would disappear and with it our beautiful happy relationship. i patted my pocket and walked inside to jennifer's apartment.
"Hello?" i ask the empty hallway
"oh i'm in here honey!" came a sweet voice, i guess she was in her bedroom. i started to walk down the hallway towards her voice when the phone rang.
she shouts over the phone. "Sugar can you get that please?"
i answer her by picking up the phone after the second ring.
"Hello?"
"um hello? is Jennifer there?"
"um she's little busy at the moment... can i help you?"
"oh no i'll, um, i think i got the wrong number..."
and the line went dead. that was weird. who was that anyway? and if it was a wrong number how come there happened to be a jennifer both here and of whom he was trying to call? i shrugged it off and went to sneak up to Jennifer. i hugged her from the back as she folded her clothes.
"Who was it?" she asked
"oh wrong number... funny thing is the guy asked for a jennifer." she stopped folding clothes and started looking sickish.
"anything wrong honey?" i ask, i didn't want her to get sick.
" oh um nothing, i just my stomach it hurts a little bit. that's all." she said returning to her honey sweet voice.
I kissed her neck, and she said, "not right now i'm folding clothes!"
"aw honey their gonna get wrinkled anyways..."
Erin aka Tigglet
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Post by Erin on Dec 1, 2004 1:16:19 GMT
like these rhymes my love is everlasting, unlike her love that has gone and passed me.
Chapter 7 *Jennifers POV*
Eric left, and the phone rang again.
"Hello?"
"Hey is this Jennifer?"
"Yah, who is this?"
"oh this is Benji you know from earlier? um can i see you?"
I hesitated for about the fiftieth time today, i mean i'm doing something so wrong just talking to this guy like this... suddenly i just blurted, "Sure meet me at the park downtown you know where that is right?"
"Yah i do, i'll see you there in a few minutes."
with that he hung up the phone and i leaned against the hallway wall. i banged my head against it shouted OW! and sank to the floor. what have i done? i mean on one hand i'm betraying my boyfriend, on the other i'm meeting this cool guy who is so much more "new" compared to Eric. i tighten my fists in frustration. I get up, get dressed, and head for the park.
I see Benji sitting on a bench looking around anxiously. Noticing me he stands up and walks to me. we start walking at first in awkward silence. then he asks, "Do you have a brother?"
This sort of threw me off, but i answered truthfully, "yes i do have a brother, he's older than me, and he lives her in the city but i don't see much of him."
"Was he at your house today though?"
suddenly it occured to me that Eric had picked up the phone. "um yes he was there today..."
a look of relief came over his face and he suddenly started talking to me. he made me laugh, and he was really sweet. when our walk was over he kissed me on the cheek and gave me his number. i went home and quickly hid it.
one day she'll come back to me andi'll take her back gracefully.
Chapter 8 *Eric's POV*
I took out my ring and studied it for the fifth time today. the diamond was perfectly cut and it rested on a golden band, inside was engraved, "i'll always love you, yours truly Eric."
i began imagining my proposal..: dream mode:. i got down on one knee, and the look of shock is on her face. i belt out my feelings, and how i love her so much, and she will begin to cry and come down on her knees too. she'll grab my hands, and kiss me hard, and say, "With all my heart, YES!" then we share another passionate kiss and hug as she puts on the ring, and stares at it all night..:end of dream mode:.
i come out of my imaginings and realize that i am home and there is another im on the computer.
Jenestjolie: hey dearest
Jenestjolie: you there?
Jenestjolie: well i have to go, i love you bye.
i hit my head for thinking about the future when the present was so near. i try to quickly say goodbye but she is offline, i silently say to myself, "I love you too."
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Post by But Why's The Rum Gone?!?!?! on Dec 1, 2004 1:25:50 GMT
was Benji stalking her.....I want Benji to stalk me!!!! lol...Me Too!!!!! lol POST MORE ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by Erin on Dec 1, 2004 1:37:32 GMT
Benji is not stalking he is simply being where ever she is haha no not what i was aiming for he's just calling her and meeting her places...
BLEH lol i'll update tomorrow if i have time, but until then let the comments roll!!
yup i'm a dork... i'm glad you like it bunny! *smiles*
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Living in a fantasy world is OK for me because there is never something left in reality.
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Post by rockerbaby on Dec 1, 2004 1:45:52 GMT
cool
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Post by Erin on Dec 2, 2004 1:36:00 GMT
ok well i will update tomorrow cuz i'm too lazy today i so happy its december tho so yah, but just for my amusement i will write down a song...no didn't write it and i give all credit to The Scary Stories Treasury...:
BA-ROOOM
O'Leary is dead, and O'Riley don't know it. O'Riley is dead, and O'Leary don't know it. They both are dead in the very same bed, and neither one knows that the other one's dead. BA-ROOOM! BA-ROOOM!
ok well anyways hope you enjoy this song muahaha ;D
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Post by MrsPaytonMartin on Dec 2, 2004 2:56:32 GMT
But I want more story
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Post by Erin on Dec 2, 2004 19:00:52 GMT
lol you'll get your wish as soon as i organize my muddled head haha muddled anywho... i promise i'll try to update tomorrow before i go to night on the town!!! woo hooo can't wait this week went by fast! but it will go by painstakingly slow for eric hint hint
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Post by Erin on Dec 3, 2004 1:27:10 GMT
well it seems that payton's wish will come one day early lol
her reason for leaving is still uncertain, and when she left i knew it was curtains.
Chapter 9 *Benji's POV*
Well when i met this girl i was interested now i'm smitten. she totally understands me, i wonder how she does it. i think i'll ask her to be my girlfriend.
This girl she went behind my back, and walked on me like a welcome mat.
Chapter 10 *Jennifer's POV*
i got an email from Benji today (wednesday) it asked if i could meet him after my shift was done at the park again. my heart raced... another meeting with him? do i really want to do this? i mean another meeting with this guy who... oh i can't describe the feelings. but i'm already in trouble if Eric finds out about the first meeting... oh Eric my oblivious dear. ok that settles it i'm going to meet Benji at the park. i'll just tell Eric that i'm working late, yup that'll do it. ok well i guess i need to call him.
Just then the phone rings
i asked her why a thousand times, and no sorrow appeared in her eyes.
Chapter 11 *Eric's POV*
i've been calling her house all afternoon, and she just now picks up. i'm nervous. i needed to invite her out to dinner, which i had been anxiously contemplating to do.
"hello?" her voice made me choke, as it was everytime
"hey!" i say with enthusiasm
"oh hey there," her voice concealed something, almost as if she was struggling to say that.
"You ok? you've been acting a little strange lately."
"oh its nothing, i guess i'm coming down with a cold or something, which i probably got from you." she added with a light flippant tone.
"oh i'm sorry babe, how bout i make it up to you by-"
just then she blurted," um i have to work late tonight so you can't come over, sorry... oh dear you were saying something...."
i was speechless again. she never had to work late. i guess this means she got premoted, it's just she said it so quickly, i had forgotten what i was going to say.
"oh haha i forgot what i was saying..." i said with a strained laugh.
"oh i'm sorry, i threw you off. it was something about making it up to me that you gave me a cold..."
"oh yah, um that's right, do you want to go out to dinner with me friday night?"
she stopped, i heard her breath suck in, in a gasp i guess, and she stuttered, much unlike her cool calm self, "s-sure honey, w-what time?"
"oh i'll pick you up, just be ready before 6:00 ok?"
"oh oh ok...."
and she hung up the phone. i momentarily pouted at not being able to say i love you. for the second time this week i missed the opportunity....
she blinked at me as i if i was thin air, and flicked her wrist as if she didn't care...
Chapter 12 *Benji's POV*
Hello, um i know we only met but i was wondering if, no no that's not good
Hey there, what's up? how bout you getting with me? no no not at all!
how about your people call my people and we'll do lunch someti- AGH! no no no no no!
i thrust my fists into the bench. why is it so hard to ask a girl out? i look up in my frustration looking toward heaven when out of my eye, i saw my angel. i quickly stood up.
"Um hey..." oh how suave i am!
"hi" she said shyly
"shall we walk?" well duh what else did she come here for? for you? i think not... but hopefully...."So i was wondering.... we just met and all.... do you want to-"
she looked slyly at me," are you trying to ask me out?"
crap did she hear what i said earlier? did i say that out loud? gosh i hate having short term memory!
"um yah that was what i was supposed to be doing... well?" i give her a hopeful look, "what is your verdict?"
she sighed, oh God that's not a good sign..."Benji, i don't know my life is complicated right now, let me answer you later on that...."
my heart sank, why, why couldn't she just say no, benji i don't like you that way??? even an eww gross no way would have worked for me not that agonizing, yes, no, maybe so.... but i played it off and just talked to her about everything...
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Post by But Why's The Rum Gone?!?!?! on Dec 3, 2004 1:56:57 GMT
Aww.........Jennifer needs to dump erin and date the Benji-man! W00T!!!!!!! lol
POST MORE ASAP!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by Erin on Dec 3, 2004 2:01:47 GMT
cough, you mean ERIC right? cause i'm not in this story and if i was i would not be dating jennifer...i would be dating benji but anyways, nikki you are so cruel
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Post by Rockerbaby on Dec 3, 2004 18:15:53 GMT
poor Eric, poor Benji
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Post by Im In L.O.V.E on Dec 5, 2004 4:37:16 GMT
whats her problem? eric's sounds realy hot and he's like totally in love with her. and benji well he is hot and all but........ah what the hell make her brake it off with eric..
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