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Post by Erin on Dec 6, 2004 0:52:35 GMT
ok peeps i actually have homework tonight so i can't update but tomorrow before i go to dance i will definitely try to update ok so
ciao!
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Post by MrsPaytonMartin on Dec 6, 2004 2:34:26 GMT
Man, you know we all want Jennifer to dump Eric so she can get it on with Benji. Just make it happen already!
WE WANT PORN!!!... nst.
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Post by Erin on Dec 6, 2004 19:32:57 GMT
ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm....
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Post by Walking Contradiction on Dec 6, 2004 22:06:08 GMT
Yo I agree with Payton...he he...
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Post by But Why's The Rum Gone?!?!?! on Dec 6, 2004 22:32:31 GMT
Yo I agree with Payton...he he... I AGREE TOO!!!!!!!!! ;D
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Post by Erin on Dec 7, 2004 0:38:51 GMT
ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm......*looks around* i dunno...................maaaaaaaaaaaybe.... but i dunno...................................
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Post by Erin on Dec 8, 2004 19:40:13 GMT
*crys into hands* i just can't give you guys (bunny, nikki, payton) what you want!!! oh well i'll update sooner or later cuz um um um i'm sick! lol that was a lie i dunno why i haven't updated but i will soon enough.....
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Post by Walking Contradiction on Dec 8, 2004 19:51:27 GMT
Dude I told her I would write it for her but she's holding back from us! I want a riot!!!!!!!!
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Post by Erin on Dec 8, 2004 20:04:31 GMT
no no no no no NO RIOTS!!!
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Post by Erin on Dec 9, 2004 1:01:32 GMT
i'll update tomorrow since i'll be at my mom's work really late and all so maybe then.....
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Post by Erin on Dec 9, 2004 20:22:26 GMT
ok tonight tonight, i mean i have an idea but bunny said that it still isn't quite good enough i'm not really good at this crap
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Post by Erin on Dec 10, 2004 0:02:34 GMT
she hurt me badly, her aim was true, she got rid of me, and went for something new.
Chapter 13 *Jennifer’s POV*
as soon as I got home I closed and locked my door and sank to the floor. Why is this happening to me? as I bury my face in my hands I wonder about who is better….
Eric is so kind and docile, he’d never hurt me. he never forgets to say I love you and he is always there for me
But Benji is kind and funny and sweet with an edge and he’d never hurt me either. If I gave him the chance I think he’d be there for me too and I bet he’d never forget I love you…..
why oh why! Fine I just need someone to talk to. I’ll call Benji. Wait that answers my question. I want to call Benji. that means he’s on my mind that means I should choose him right? Right? I guess this means I should call Eric to call it off……
I die a little everyday, I regret not making her stay…
Chapter 14 *Eric’s POV*
.: Dream Mode :. I carry Jennifer into the hotel suite. I set her on the bed and gently caress her body. She moans and gets up. I push her back down but she forces her way up.
"be patient dear! I just need to slip out of this dress, its so constraining! Haha" she says with a delicate chuckle
I quickly sit on the bed and anxiously wait for her to come out. She steps out in satin undies and I start to drool. She giggles and grabs my hand. She guides my hand up and down her body and soon I go on to guide myself. I moan she moans and we kiss some more. I lay her on the bed-- .: Dream Mode :.
Oh Crap! I look down, I’m having a frickin boner! Fugg! Ok ok um cold water cold water! Jennifer is coming over any second! Crap crap crap! I run into the bathroom and run the cold water. When the tub fills up I jump in clothes and all and freaking freeze. Ok ok ok don’t think about it don’t think about it crap freaking fantasies! And the phone rings.
I get out and towel off I change clothes, and still try to keep my fantasy out of my conscious mind. I shake off excess water like a dog and ruffle my hair so that its standing up. I run up to the phone just before the 6th ring and pick it up
"Hello?"
"Hey."
"Hey! Jennifer what’s wrong? You don’t sound so good, I hope you feel well enough to go to dinner tomorrow night!"
I hear her gulp, that doesn’t sound good…"um Eric about that. I think we need to cancel it."
I was suddenly sad, "aw if your sick then I’ll come treat you to a dinner at my house, or better yet your house, so you don’t have to go anywhere!"
"actually no Eric, I mean we need to um this is so hard to say, Eric I want to break up with you."
I must not have heard her she sounded like she said she wanted to break up with me…. "Excuse me?"
"Eric don’t act like you didn’t hear me I told you I want to break up!" she practically screams that line.
My heart sank, w-w-why would she want to break up with me? "What did I do? I apologize for whatever it was, I swear it wasn’t on purpose, Jennifer I love you how do you want to break up with me? you mean everything to me! you’re-"
"Eric don’t make this any harder" she cries into the phone, "I’m just not feeling this relationship anymore, its lost something and I don’t think we can get it back."
"But I’ll try to get it back I’ll do anything! Just tell me what is missing."
"I-I met this other guy."
My sadness turned to anger, "oh so your leaving me for some fricking guy you probably just met off the street? That’s great, very classy of you God Jennifer I thought you were better than that."
She cries harder and I suddenly regret my words. "honey I’m sorry its just I don’t want to lose you…"
"Eric I have to go… I’m sorry this didn’t work out… we had our good times just remember that…. Bye."
And she hung up. Tears were streaming down my face and I felt so terrible. If I wanted I would have died right then and there but something was holding me to life. I left the phone and ran to the hamper to take out my pants, I searched through the pockets to find the ring I had put in there earlier. I frantically look around, search my pockets, and drawers, I remember my quick cold bath and run to the bathtub. I look in the bathtub as the ring goes down the drain with the rushing water…..
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Post by Walking Contradiction on Dec 10, 2004 0:09:07 GMT
All I gotta say is..WOW!
I love the ending........I really really do...that's awsome...so much symbolism....
He he boner.......*mumbles something about how she could have written it better*
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Post by But Why's The Rum Gone?!?!?! on Dec 10, 2004 0:49:52 GMT
dude...that better not be the end...seriously...there BETTER BE more!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by Erin on Dec 10, 2004 0:56:20 GMT
it wasn't until you said that.....*sits and ponders* hmmmmmm
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