rockerbaby
Movin' On
Living in a fantasy world is OK for me because there is never something left in reality.
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Post by rockerbaby on Dec 10, 2004 2:10:52 GMT
hmmmmmmmm
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Post by Erin on Dec 11, 2004 0:53:06 GMT
and to put your mind at ease, no that is not the end not yet, that is simply the ending to that chapter, my favorite part lol
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Post by MrsPaytonMartin on Dec 11, 2004 21:49:58 GMT
Ack! C'mon Erin! You gotta make Benji and Jen do it!!!
Great-ness, by the way. Post more!
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Post by Walking Contradiction on Dec 11, 2004 22:25:41 GMT
I agree......
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Im In L.O.V.E
Movin' On
everybody will be left out....
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Post by Im In L.O.V.E on Dec 13, 2004 22:32:16 GMT
its missing something......oh ya!ben ji and jen doing it
post more its great
*caro*
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Post by But Why's The Rum Gone?!?!?! on Dec 20, 2004 2:24:21 GMT
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Post by Erin on Dec 20, 2004 2:31:20 GMT
thing is i don't make people do it before they even start going out so maybe later you guys.... oh and new post coming up...
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Post by Walking Contradiction on Dec 20, 2004 2:43:45 GMT
oh come on! it can be like SLC Punk when they do it right on the park bench!!!!!!!!!! oh....sorry...he he he
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Post by Erin on Dec 20, 2004 3:00:35 GMT
The tears they sting, my heart is broken, i cry all night, but not a word is spoken.
Chapter 15
*Eric's POV*
I open the window and the cold nipping wind slaps my face. I run to my bed and let the tears run. I scream "why" into the pillow then turn my head to look out the window.
The tears stream down my face as i mouth the word "why" over and over again. i put my thumb to my teeth and mouth"why" around it. The salt stings my chapped lips, and i just cry more...
I get up and grab my notebook, The chilly wind freezes me and makes me numb. If only it could numb the pain. but i write quickly and pause only to wipe away the tears from the page.
,Dear Journal
She left me today. She told me she met this guy. If she just met this guy how does she know he's better than me? unless she's been cheating on me the whole time...Crap why couldn't i see it? She had to work late... Bull. or maybe not. Maybe her job at the store is a cover-up. Maybe her main job is to sell herself at the corner. The Slut!!
how can i say that about her? I love her! I was willing to marry this woman. I guess she wasn't so willing. I can't believe she would do this to me...
there's nothing to say, no one to talk to, so why am i still here, she's out with someone else...
Chapter 16
*Benji's POV*
Oh My God! She said YES?! I'm going to pick her up tonight wearing my best, and we are going out! I wonder what's she's wearing?... ah who cares! she will look beautiful. I can't believe she said YES!?!
I pull up to her apartment and knock on the door. She opens it and comes out in a short dress. her make-up was flawless and the black glittery dress made my heart beat faster. I escorted her to the car and set her in. Then with a run, jump, and a click of the heels i got into the driver's seat. She laughed then grew silent. Something was troubling her, but i shrugged it off as date jitters, because oh yah! she said YES!
It got darker when she left, the weather took a turn, and with the weather my mood changed, i still love her...
Chapter 17
*Jennifer's POV*
As we drove along, i heard and felt the wind whipping and lashing out at the car. What happened? it was so beautiful and sunny earlier. the weather went gloomy as if it was disappointed with me...
What did i do anyways?? Just because i broke up with a long dead relationship just as i was about to go out and have fun with this new cool guy? I've done nothing wrong... its completely normal right?
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Post by Walking Contradiction on Dec 20, 2004 3:09:01 GMT
Pretty good....post mores!
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rockerbaby
Movin' On
Living in a fantasy world is OK for me because there is never something left in reality.
Posts: 904
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Post by rockerbaby on Dec 21, 2004 2:52:11 GMT
^ hey i luv this story, and your siggy
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Post by But Why's The Rum Gone?!?!?! on Dec 21, 2004 17:28:35 GMT
DUUDE!!!!!!!!! YOU NEED TO POST MORE!!!!!!!! LIKE NOW!!!!!!!!!
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Im In L.O.V.E
Movin' On
everybody will be left out....
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Post by Im In L.O.V.E on Dec 21, 2004 23:16:53 GMT
its good and i didnt know that the wind talked?? maby my friends arent that crazy after all......  |
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Post by Erin on Dec 22, 2004 4:23:01 GMT
^^ no offense because i am crazy but i think you are a touch crazy yourself where is the wind talking?  |
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Im In L.O.V.E
Movin' On
everybody will be left out....
Posts: 832
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Post by Im In L.O.V.E on Dec 23, 2004 3:48:05 GMT
**  maby i am crazy??  |
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maby i am crazy?? 