Passing Spanish Class ~ my song

[benjisbabyboo]

ok, i wrote this song... and i recorded it... and a few other songs.. if ya wanna see those, just tell me, but this is one of my favorites:

[glow=red,2,300]Passing Spanish Class[/glow]

He’s got that charm and I’m not sure what it is
I think he stinks and his breath smells really bad
He got me a gift card to Hot Topic
Just for the fun of it
But I didn’t see any sense in it
He thinks he rules the world
But he plays Pokemon
He thinks I feel the same
I wish he’d go away
He doesn’t like skateboarding
He thinks it’s really gay
I think the opposite
But what was I to say??

[glow=red,2,300]At least I’m passing Spanish class now
He told me he really liked me, yea
At least I’m passing Spanish class now
I really think that he needs therapy, yea
At least I'm passing Spanish class now[/glow]

He told his mom to give me an A on all my papers
I don’t know why, but she did it anyway
I fall asleep in class
And I pass a lot of notes
I think this guy just might be my antidote

[glow=red,2,300]Chorus[/glow]

Yea, yea, yea, yea
Now I’m sitting here
He’s drowning in his tears
Cuz I told him how I felt
And now my heart just melt

[glow=red,2,300]Chorus[/glow]

Yea, yea, yea, yea
I think I’m failing Spanish class now
I think there’s nothing I can do, now
He said it was OK, yea, yea
But why are all my friends getting ‘A’s??
So now I’m failing Spanish Class
My mom is so gonna kick my ass
Why does life have to be so hard?
Can I just get a lucky card?
Yea, yea, yea, yea


EDIT: IF YOU CRITIZIE, PLZ USE CONSTUCTIVE CRITIZISM, B/C IF U CAN'T DO IT BETTER, THEN WHY SHOULD I??

[benjisbabyboo]

come on, y'all comment, ur making me feel bad...

[sheepgoquack27]

Hahaha, it's good I like it. It's catchy and everything rhymes.. hehe

[benjisbabyboo]

thank you...... i think....

[XOXO Jecca.]

umm, I am really sorry. It si good. are you a beginner??? i just think it could have a better catch. now please dont get all pissed at me. You asked my opinion, riight???

[benjisbabyboo]

uh, I've been writing songs for about a year and 1/2, but that was one of my first songs... there's a couple better ones, but, cha...

Oh, and I respect your opinion....