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Post by Lil' on Jan 16, 2006 20:41:05 GMT
Chapter 6
*Saturday night*
Anna was very nervous. She was going to see Tony. It was a very good show. “Hey, you came!” Tony said when he finished. “Yes, because you invited me” “Did you like the performance?” “Yaeh, it was cool. I think you should play in the Wraped Tour” “With Good Charlotte” Both laughed “Do you wanna drink...something?” “I...had to go” “Pleeeeaaase” “If you insist...” They went to a bar a had a few drinks. “And...what is Benji like a boyfriend?” “He is very sweet, I can’t bear being away from him” “I supose you are a bit sad” “A bit” ‘What is he asking me?’ She thought. “I’m sure you need a man to be with you” “What?” “I mean, I like you” “WHAT?” “Since the first time I saw you I’m in love with you, I can’t get you out of my head and...and...and I’m sad that Benji had met you before I did” Tony cofesed. “You like...me?” “Yeah but--” “’Cause I like you too!” Anna admitted. “Really?” “Yep, but I couldn’t tell you that because, you know, I’m with Benji” “You’re right” “I REALLY have to go” “O...kay. But please, don’t tell Benji this” “Of course. Bye Tone-Tone” Said Anna
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Post by Lil' on Jan 16, 2006 20:43:02 GMT
Chapter 7
*Beep* “Hey Anna, it’s Tony. I wanted to know if you are busy tonight, because we had to talk about...you know. Please call me.” Anna had listened that message a thousand times, but she still did’nt know if she had to call him or not. She finally decide to call him, but when she was going to dial the phone rang. *Ring ring* “Yeah?” “Hellooooooooo” “Who is?” “Don’t you reconize yor boyfriend’s voice?” Anna was so into her thoughts that she didn’t reconize. “Sorry, babe! I’m tired and I was falling asleep” “So, you went to Mest show?” “Yeah” “I’m glad you like my best friend!” “Uhu” That was all that she couldn say, because she wanted to tell him that she liked Tony very. “Are you coming for my ‘Birthdaze’?” “It’s called birthday, and I told you thousando times that I can’t because I have an exam” “But it’s my birthday!” “I know but it’s not my fault” “And is Joel’s!” “I know! Don’t repeat it!” Anna WAS soing to see Benji, but she wanted it to be a surprise. “Sorry, baby” “It’s OK” “Gotta go. Take care ande remember that I love” “I love you too and I miss you” “Bye” “Bye” ‘I’d better don’t call Tony’ She said to herself.
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Post by Lil' on Jan 16, 2006 20:47:16 GMT
very intriguing I must say.. good start definitely... XD Thanx thanx thanx!!! You are the only one that reads my Fic, well at least somebody does, hehe. Chapter 8 is the last that I'm gonna post today, because I don't feel well and I have to go to bed. I love you, I love you, I love you!!! Lil'
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Post by Lil' on Jan 16, 2006 20:48:44 GMT
Chapter 8
*Benji’s birthday*
Anna went to Maryland to give Benji a surprise. “Can I help you, miss?” A familiar voice said while she was lookin reading a poster. “No, tha-- Tony! What are you doing here?” “I am visiting my best friends. What are YOU doing here? Didn’t you have an exam? That was why you didn’t call me” “No, it was a lie so I couls surprise Benji” “Ah” There was a unconfortable silence.“I have to go to the hotel. So...see you later” “Okay” Anna went to the airport doors, but then she heard Tony calling her. “Anna! You forgot this!” He said giving her one of her bags. “Thanks” She said trying not to look at his eyes. Then she saw a couple kissing each other passionately. “I was wondering if you wanted to have a coffee...” “WHAAAAAAAT?!” She screamed. “A cup of coffee” “Not that! I mean that!” She said ponting the couple. Tony turned and saw the couple. “BENJI?!” She said, not realizon that he was screaming Benjis head him and turned. The girl that was with him was staring at Tony and Anna as if they were nuts. “Anna, I--” Tried Benji to explain while he was walking towards her. “No, go away! I don’t wanna see you!” Everybody was looking at them, Anna realized it so she decided to go. She started to run but somebody pulled her clothes and took her to a taxi. “I have to tell you something” Said Joel sitting next to her
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Post by Lil' on Jan 16, 2006 20:50:05 GMT
OK, that's all for now. I hope you like it.
Luv!
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Post by Erin on Jan 16, 2006 20:56:19 GMT
hmmmm very interesting.
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Post by Lil' on Jan 19, 2006 0:17:41 GMT
Capítulo 9
“That girl is Nina, his ex-girlfriend. When you two started going out, he was dating her amdbroke up with her because of you. But when you told him that you was not coming for our birthday, he was depressed and called her” “He’s such an asshole. But why you didn’t say that?” “Why you dind’t say that you were coming? I tried to convince him, but he called her anyway” “When I try to do something nice everything gets wrong!” She said starting to cry. “No...oh, please don’t cry” “I’m so stupid!” She hold her head in her hand. “Anna, you’re my sis” Tried Joel to calm her down while he was holding her. “I’m sure he love you and didn’t want to hurt you” “You sure” She asked sobbing. “Yeah” She calmed down. And then she remebered it. “Happy birthday, bro”
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Post by Lil' on Jan 19, 2006 0:19:09 GMT
Chapter 10
Joel dropped Anna in the hotel and the he went back to his house. When he arrived he grab his twin and took him to a room. “Are you stupid?!” “What happens?” “Don’t be retarded. What were you doing with Nina?” “It’s not your business!” “My business? My business! Anna is like my sister!” “Well, I didn’t it on purpose” “I hope so. Because the next time I kill you. Understood?” Said Joel pointing Benji with the finger. “OK, Joel” Joel calm down and realized. “Where’s Tony?”
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Post by Lil' on Jan 25, 2006 17:58:51 GMT
I think nobody is reading this...
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Post by lipservice on Jan 26, 2006 20:09:31 GMT
I am so reading it and it's goooood
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Post by Lil' on Jan 29, 2006 21:51:45 GMT
I am so reading it and it's goooood Thanx, sweety!!!
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Post by Lil' on Jan 29, 2006 21:54:22 GMT
Chapter 11
*Ring ring* Anna’s phone started to ring. She dried her tears and took the tube. “Yeah?” “Anna?” “Tony...” She said sobbing. “You ‘kay?” “I’m...a stupid girl” She said crying. “Calm down, babe, you...where are you?” “In the Waldorf” (Duh! I couldn’t think another name!) “I’m going” “No, Tony! Tony? Tony?” The line was dead.
*15 minutes later*
“Tone!” He said when he arrived at the hotel. “Anna, calm down” He hold her and made her sit on the bed. “Why? I love him so much, why he did it?” “I...don’t know, he must be crazy” “Why my life is such a shit? Why when I’m happy something has to turn me down?” “But your life it’s not a shit” “Belive me, it IS” “May I ask you?” “Because...because...men only think about sex” “NO! That’s a lie” “I’m right” “I don’t think so” “Let’s see. If I do this, what do you think?” She said kissing his lips “I think...I think...I think that I’m gonna fuck you right now” “What?” She said pretending to be surprised, but she really wanted that. “You heard me, miss, I’m gonna fuck you” “If you insist...” She said, and then she kissed him passionately. Minutes later she broke the kiss. “I can’t do this” “I know. I’d better go”
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Post by Lil' on Jan 29, 2006 21:57:02 GMT
Well, I hace the 3 last chapters, but I didn't traslated them ;D so...please, you will have to wait some days... Did you like this chapter?
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Post by lipservice on Jan 30, 2006 23:41:50 GMT
It's love =D
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Post by Lil' on Feb 7, 2006 23:48:39 GMT
Chapter 12
*Some months later*
“...And this Saturday, Maryland’s Good Charlotte will play in Apotigmya...” Tony was listening the radio. It had been a lot of time since he didn’t see Benji, Joel or...Anna. He turned it off and went for a walk. When he was walking down the park he saw a happy couple kissing each other, Then he reconized the faces, so he went to a shop. When he was going to go out of the shop he stumbled with somebody. “Oh, forgive me, I...Tony?” “I don’t know why you’re impressed. I also live here, Anna” “I thought...” Anna tried to explain. “You thought that I wouldn’t know that you forgave him” “But...” “How could you?” “He regreated” “But he was cheating on you!” “He... It’s not your business!” “It’s not my business, but you wanted me to fuck you!” “Oh, you’re not on your senses” “I’m not crazy!” “I’m sorry, but I love Benji and he loves me, and we are going to spend Valentine’s together” “Yeah, tomorrow” In that moment Benji entered the shop. “Anna, let’s go, I don’t want you to be with HIM” He hold Anna. ‘So, she told him that I kissed her’ Thought Tony. “Yeah, let’s go, babe” Said Anna exiting the shop. “Yeah, admit that it was the bets kiss you have recivied!” Benji closed the door. He looked into Tony's eyes and he hit Tony's stomach. “You'd better don't touch my girlfriend, because if you do it I'll put a bullet into your head!” And he hit him again. The he turned and exited the shop while Tony was ling on the floor.
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