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Post by Lil' on Jan 3, 2006 4:05:58 GMT
This is my first fan fic, and, well, the first one in English too, 'cause, you know, I speak Spanish. I hope you like it!!! If there's something that you don't understand just ask. C' ya!!! Lil'
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Post by Lil' on Jan 3, 2006 4:12:19 GMT
My bloody Valentine (By Lil')
This is the beginning of this story. Anna was 24, her hair was orange and her eyes green- She lived in Chicago. She was dating a guy called Benjamin (Duh! Madden) He was the guitar player of a band. He lived in Maryland. He was nice and funny and he had been dating Anna for six months, until...
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Post by Lil' on Jan 3, 2006 4:27:04 GMT
Chapter 1
*Chicago*
Anna was returning home from the University. The phone rang just when she came in .
*Ring ring*
“Hello?” She asked.
“Hi sweet!” A grin crossed her face when he heard his voices.
“Oohhh, my beautiful thing!”
“I gotta a piece of news!”
“I'm listening.”
“GC is going to go to Chicago!”
“Really?”
“Yeps!”
“Where do you play?”
“In Apotigmya, Saturday 15” He innnformed her.
“Y suppose that you'll stay some time here to be with me, won't you?”
“Of course. And I wanna introduce yu somebody”
“OK”
“Well, I gotta go. Joel sais hi”
“Same to him”
“See you”
“Bye, honey!”
She really wanted to spend some days with him. Se missed him so much, she needed his arms embrassinng her, and he also missed her so much and needes to touch her and feel her soft skin.
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Post by Lil' on Jan 3, 2006 4:42:51 GMT
Chapter 2
It was the they thar Benji and Anna were going to meet again. She was at the airport, se was very nervous, her hand were shakin'. Five minutes later 5 pung guys made their appearance “Hi pretty!” Said Benji while he hold her and kissed her lips.
Then Anna took GC to the Hotel in her bus. They got in and talked a lot about the last news. But some minutes later Anna had to go.
“Bye, Benj, se you later” She said leaving the room.
“Don't go, please, stay with us!” He insisted holding her and doing the famous puppy face.
“Don't look at me like that, I cannot do anything!”
“Yeah, don't go to the University!”
“I have to, it's m duty”
“Hum” He said pretending to be offended.
“Bye babe, be a good boy and don't cheat on me”
"I will try to"
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Post by Lil' on Jan 3, 2006 4:44:28 GMT
Hey, please tell me if you liked it. I know I'm not a good writer but I'm doin' my best.
C' ya!!!
Lil0
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Post by lipservice on Jan 3, 2006 15:40:10 GMT
It's good ;D Tell me more
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Post by sUiCiDe_iS_PaInLeSs! on Jan 4, 2006 13:27:15 GMT
ooooh pretty i wanna read more preety pwese??
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Post by Lil' on Jan 6, 2006 4:25:49 GMT
Ok, thanx, I know now it's boring but "it gets better than you know" Luv!!! ;D
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Post by Lil' on Jan 6, 2006 4:27:46 GMT
ooooh pretty i wanna read more preety pwese?? Ok, I will try. Thanx for reading it, I think nobody else will read it 'cause it SUCKS!! I'll do my best Luv!!!
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Post by Lil' on Jan 6, 2006 4:49:11 GMT
Chapter 3
*The next day*
Anna arrived to Apotigmya minutes before than GC. The show was prety good, she was sure they were going to be famous. When the guys finished she went to congrat them. “You were so good!” She said holding Joel.
“Really?” He asked.
“Yeah, and you…” She said poniting her boyfriendo with the finger “…you, you were the best”
"I AM the best, and also in the bed”
“We'll see that” She responded sarcastly (I dont' know how to write that word). The, she went to talk with the rest of the band. Joel was staring Benji with his eyes wide opened.
“You didn't sleep with her?”
“Eh…mmm…n…no…” Benji was very nervous.
“Don't you think you should?”
“Eh...yeah...maybe”
“This night will be THE night”
“What night?”
“The night when you sl--!”
“Shut up!”
“Don't you think that Anna it's THAT person?” Joel asked serious.
“I think so"
"OK, be prepared. This night will be your best night... and hers"
"I hope so"
*Minutes later*
“Anna, I wanna introduce somebody. This is my friend Tony” Said Benji. She was hypnotized, she couldn't believe what she was seeing. He had hazel blue eyes and blonde hair.
“Hi. So, you're the famous Anna” Said Tony.
“Hi” She responded in a whisper as if talking with him were a sin. The she realized something "Why famous?”
“Benj talks nos stoping about you”
“Really?” She asked turning red.
“Yeah, I think I already knew you!” Then Benji hold her and she felt like waking up from a dream, a beautiful dream .
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Post by Lil' on Jan 6, 2006 4:53:46 GMT
I won't post next week 'cause I'll go camping, sorry. I hope you like the 3° chapter!!!
Luv!
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Post by Lil' on Jan 15, 2006 1:21:58 GMT
Tomorrow chapter 4!!
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Post by Lil' on Jan 16, 2006 20:24:14 GMT
Chapter 4
“Hey, wanna go to the hotel for a while?” Benji asked his girlfriend. “Hum...I dunno...” Tony was still in her head. “Pleeeeeaaaaaaaase, just a few minutes” She couldn’t resist him. When they arrived at the hotel, Anna was astonished. Benji’s room was perfect, everything was in its place, it was rare, he always had his clothes spreaded on the floor, but now it was tidy. She sat on the bed and he did the same by her side and he hold her. She turned in his direction y found a pair of beatiful chocolate eyes, they couldn’t stop looking at each other. She closed her eyes and started to move her face to feel his lips against hers, he laid on the bed and she sat on his top,. He touched her tighs and then he put his hands under her skirt. In the moment he was going to touch her ass she broke apart the kiss “What happened, sweety?” He asked. “It’s my piercing “Okay, I help you” When she was done, he kissed her again passionately and took out her skirt.
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Post by Lil' on Jan 16, 2006 20:26:39 GMT
Chapter 5
*Some weeks later*
*Ring ring* “Hello?” “Anna?” “Yes, and who is this?” “Tony” She was freezed and she didn’t know what to say. “Tony Lovato...Benji’s friend, remember?” “Yeah, yeah. How are you?” “Fine, fine. Hey, I have a band called Mest and we are going to play and...and...I want to know if you would like to go” ‘Oh my God’ She thought ‘It’s a dream’ “Yes of course” “OK, so...see yo next Saturday” “See you!” ‘It’s a dream, it’s a dream...it HAS to’
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Post by Erin on Jan 16, 2006 20:39:44 GMT
very intriguing I must say.. good start definitely... XD
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